Picture of Food

Is there anything food can't do?

 

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Current rating is 4.50. Total votes 10.
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I have on many occasions planned my day around food. Not just meals but food all day. No wonder we have a weight problem - there are other people just like me. Reality Read.

From: joy powers | Created on: 5/23/2012 11:23:15 PM

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Food
I really enjoyed this story and I can totally relate!

From: Laurie DeSoto | Created on: 5/2/2012 9:40:33 PM

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Food
It was clear why character ate constantly and thought about food but I expected more emotion in story and an emotional end.  Maybe  story could have ended in a resolution or in a twist like in O. Henry or writer could have revealed root of overeating. There was one misspelled word: site should be sight.

From: Annette Taylor | Created on: 4/30/2012 12:49:36 PM

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Title could be catchier
This story does a good job of capturing the meaninglessness of a life that is revolved around food.  Perhaps it could use some more tension to draw in the reader, because the risk of pointing out how mundane such a life is, is that the reading of it could also get mundane.  Also, as a writer, your job is to always find just the right word.  Resorting to using profanity is an easy way out, plus it rarely captures the exact word you needed.  I realize that it could reflect the character's attitude, but I still think it's best to find a more fitting word.

From: Alanna Underwood | Created on: 4/27/2012 10:31:02 AM

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