This is extremely well written! I would be hard pressed to even find a typo, and that is the most professionalism I have seen! I do have to tell you though, I am new to this site, and I have only been reading the contest stories from the bottom of the list up. I would believe it had actually happened, it was all so real and well done. My Mom smoked, and I found the cigarette thing disturbing, it was so realistic! I am trying to consider the symbolism, like H kept the apartment the way the Ziggy characters' mother had had it, in some effort to lure her back? The vacant nature reflective of their lives? The Cheese Sandwich had me laughing, heartily! It was certainly a great analogy of the entire story! However, I crashed fast enough when "H" died! The will thing is great, too! Congratulations! I am sincerely impressed!
3/31/2012 7:30:44 PM
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