Picture of The Date

Divine, Romantic revenge 

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Word Count 1500
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This story has some nice imagery in it.  There are a few typos that distract from it a little (but, maybe only to me).  I think though, however masterfully begun, the "positive end of infirmary," comment is meant to say "positive end of infamy," but, I did look up infirmary, and it works, so I can't be sure that wasn't intended.  It seemed as though the description of their "love affair" was somehow out of place, maybe it should come earlier?  I am sure it's just me, but somehow, it seemed bumpy.  In any case, please don't let anything I have said discourage you!  I am new to the site, and perhaps my perception is what is off.  Best of luck to you!

From: Spring Free | Created on: 3/31/2012 8:31:42 PM

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