Nice little ghost story! There were a few typos, but it is a well written story! Tragic, even! The only thing that would bother me about it, is, if it were an accident, why keep it a secret, and why would the father "kill" his son? Oh, and only a soldier newly returned from war would go back and sleep in a room he'd seen such a terrifying ghost in!
4/1/2012 9:03:46 PM
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