A Dark Glimpse!
I laughed at this! When one takes into consideration the way women go out of their way to impress men and such (heels), this is funny! This character worries about stuff I'd never consider men worrying about, and I certainly never thought the mens' room could be such a ladies' room! (TIC) The stall thing, is hilarious, after all, if the other guy is in a stall, behind a closed door, how could he even see you to give you a "dirty look?" But, the unexpected surprise from under the door was a wallop! I've always said being a writer was like running around naked, if only to convince others to feel more comfortable in their own skin, and there is that, in the beginning of this story, but, the "Hanged Man" was something utterly out of the blue! Well done!
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Spring Free
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Created on:
4/3/2012 3:17:06 PM
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