What A "BEAUTIFUL Story"!!! :):):)
I really love happy endings and this one was just great!! This shows great promise. I wish you well in your writing career. keep up the beautiful work, :)
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Linda Pickens Phalen
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8/25/2012 2:25:00 PM
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A Lovely Heartwarming Story
It has a few choppy sentences that needs to be fixed, but all in all a very nice story.
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Indira Nankoosingh
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7/30/2012 1:45:18 PM
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christmas memories
Wonderful story, truly a heartwarming tale as you put. Take a second look over it and perfect a few mistakes I saw and this story will be a complete masterpiece of human spirit and hope. Nice job.
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Mitchell S. Martens
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1/15/2012 12:39:00 PM
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