Good Job
I liked the moral of this story; it also appears to be well researched and relevant to the lives of the readers. It does need some editing though. It might help to stay a little closer to reality on this story. I would be interesting to read a story written by this author in the same style of writing as "The Lion and The Girl," but intended to be reality.
From:
Isaiah Zerbst
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Created on:
2/23/2012 7:14:40 PM
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