Picture of Gabriel

  Quick little note here. This is not the full book. It is however the first two chapters of a book I have writen and one day (vary soon) plan to be published. I would though like to hear the opinions of anyone willing to read what I am putting on the site. Thank you.

Gabriel

Gods are no longer created.

All the heroes of the past have ether lived long enough to see themselves become the very monsters they fought or are dead. I live as a half mortal living among the Gods of every culture’s legends. I have seen wonders and lived through horrors. I have seen the true nature of this and countless other words.

I have told lies and stolen from more Gods and immortals then you probably know exist. My greatest enemy is the same man who gave me life. My second is my Uncle that I have never met. My love is the moon Goddess Aylin.

I am no Hero. I serve myself, fight for myself. I do not care for humanity. I have never been one of you. I have slain Gods and have made armies quake in fear. I am Gabriel, the last son of Romulus. 

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Interesting
It's an interesting concept, but maybe you should have another person proofread it for you. In many instances small things like the wrong tense can break the flow of the story. Definitely with a little polishing this can become a really interesting story.

From: Eric Snowmane | Created on: 12/26/2011 11:35:25 PM

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