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The Humanity Bank

by Kay Ewy
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What is heaven? What is hell? What will the final judgement look like and the justice meted for our lives?

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Current rating is 4.29. Total votes 7.
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The Humanity Bank
I enjoyed it. What I really liked about it was your writing style. You should keep writing!

From: Aaron Chain | Created on: 3/11/2012 2:31:45 PM

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Your writing is reasonably good, but the story is just to drawn out for what it was, what about the end, does he just stand there forever? Could have had a few more points of interest throughout the story. One other thing that didn't sit well with me was the characters vulgarity, I know its purpose but it just comes off as a little shrewd and takes away from the tale. Will look for more of your stories because you do seem to have a knack for writing.

From: Mitchell S. Martens | Created on: 1/10/2012 4:18:34 PM

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interesting take on lifes deeds. Not Karma, not God but straight forward accounting.

From: Kay Ewy | Created on: 1/10/2012 2:28:07 PM

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Well done!
Loved it! Well written with a good flow. Original subject matter, with a perfect twist.
Well done!

From: R. D. Wenmann | Created on: 12/16/2011 2:40:51 PM

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