Haily Every After
Very good story. It held my attention and made me wonder how it was going to end. I wish you much luck in your writing career. Thank You for asking me for a review. It is always an honor to be asked for my opinion. :):):) Thank You!
Sincerely,
Linda Pickens Phalen
PS I would love it if you would give me a review on one or two of my short stories?
"God's Secial Child" "The Many Faces Of L" And "The Trucker And The Author" are just three of my favorites. I also voted on your story.:)
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Linda Pickens Phalen
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Created on:
12/16/2011 12:56:49 AM
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Happily Ever After was a great title for this story
This short story was a great story. It almost seems as if the writer was writing about personal experiences. I liked the descriptive sentences and I liked the way that the writer kept my attention through the whole story. I wanted and needed to finish reading the story to see how it would end. I would like a Happily Ever After Part 2. I want to know how the story is going to end. Good Job!!!!!
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Stanley Barrett
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Created on:
12/15/2011 2:38:20 PM
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