Needs Some Improvement, But Alright
There were a lot of typos, grammar problems and sentence structure problems. The story itself was decent, but needs some work. I think this story had great potential, but it needs a little more editing.
From:
Samantha Coville
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Created on:
12/9/2011 12:53:05 PM
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