Picture of December 21, 2010

 Vacation with my family, and a heartache awaits us the very morning.. 

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File Format Book will be delivered as a PDF download.
Current rating is 2.67. Total votes 3.
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Needs Some Improvement, But Alright
There were a lot of typos, grammar problems and sentence structure problems. The story itself was decent, but needs some work. I think this story had great potential, but it needs a little more editing.

From: Samantha Coville | Created on: 12/9/2011 12:53:05 PM

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