Amusing & Entertaining
Enjoyable tale. Emotions screamed from the screen. The constant "I'll get her!" lust for revenge was present throughout. With a little increase in writing skills the author could become very readable.
From:
Tony Dawson
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4/3/2013 9:42:26 AM
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Raw, Intense, Gripping
This story is about as real as it gets; the emotions are raw and intense and there is steam coming off the page. Yes, it's rough around the edges and could use some editing and polish, but it is gripping from start to finish and reads well. I'd like to see more from this writer.
From:
Preston Randall
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Created on:
11/24/2011 12:55:21 PM
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