There are some places where it is hard to distinguish between reality and the girl's dream. Overall it is a very imaginative story and well thought out. Great content and allegorical relevance. I still do not know if this story is supposed to take place in the present day or far into the past; if this is the case, then I would change some of the more modern words to ones of older vintage.
2/23/2012 6:33:48 PM
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