The story's only hook was the very brief synopsis. If it wern't for that, I never would have read past the first page.
It certainly was a suspenseful story. I kept waiting for something to happen, and nothing ever did.
However, I give you a chance to get even. You can read, and review, any one of the several short stories and one novel I have posted on AuthorStand. All you have to do is go to the home page of AuthorStand and type J.C. O'Brien, in the author block. My postings should appear.
Good Luck in the future!
11/9/2011 3:09:46 PM
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