Needs work
This piece had many mispelled words. Also you would need to put sentences in a seperate lines when someone is talking when there are more than two people talking, so it makes it easier to know who's saying what in a conversation. I do like the story though. It's a very sweet story.
From:
Indira Nankoosingh
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Created on:
7/30/2012 1:04:17 PM
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