Cute story
You don't need to use so many pages for a short story unless you are publishing the book, and their are a few little mistakes. Also, I don't believe in the idea of treating pets like objects, and giving them as presents. Otherwise a very cute story.
From:
Indira Nankoosingh
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Created on:
6/9/2012 2:38:57 PM
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