Hmmmm
While not my usual genre of reading, I was very impressed with this piece. Though it reminds me of the Steven King style, I feel that this would be a good set up to another piece, but it's a little weak as a stand alone piece. However, I truly enjoyed it!
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James Conright
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3/28/2012 2:01:45 PM
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Vandals
Good story; developed the characters well within the constraints of "flash fiction." A good read. Just wish you had a little more space to show the leader's inner motivation/anger, as well as the epiphany of the narrator. One of the shortcomings of this recent and popular short story form...
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John Laird
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12/9/2011 12:20:46 PM
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Great Story
Great story, good plot. It's a short read, yet we still get to know the characters well.
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Alyssa Bree
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11/21/2011 5:28:53 PM
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Good story
Preston is officially one of my favourite authors here. The story flows naturally and rings true. It could be any neighbourhood....well done.
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Jennifer Drury
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11/14/2011 3:25:22 PM
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