Started out great....
Plot: Plot was unclear. I got that these men were looking for meaning in their lives, but the end of the story didn't really wrap up anything for me--other than 'after the storm we clean up and move on'....
Characters: Great job on character development, I thought. Even in such a short work, the characters were well-defined and the writer does a great job of giving a visual of each one. Each character seems dark, gloomy and lost in his/her own way.
Style: Loved the style--the characters' dialogue takes over and leads the reader effortlessly through the story.
Strengths: Interesting characters and inviting writing style.
Weaknesses: The flip-flopping between present and past was a little clumsy at times. Made it a little difficult to follow. Also the purpose and plot weren't clear.
Teresa McCoy and Cindy Suda
11/1/2011 3:34:07 PM
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