Picture of Memories of Tabitha

A murder that clenched his being, a secret he carried for twenty years, and a death that for Steven came too soon. He never told anyone what he saw Tabitha do to Laura in the woods that day, and now in her death he finally understands what he saw on that fateful day all those years ago.

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Current rating is 4.50. Total votes 4.
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Personal Demons
I will be honest. I read your story not because of the description, but because of the title. There was once a girl named Tabitha in my life. I thought of her as I read your story. I loved your story. An unlikely hero completely transforms your story. I love it. As far as mechanics go, I don't believe, as another reviewer did, that your story needs editing. I do think that it needs transitions between time periods. All in all, excellent work!

From: Jeanne Newton | Created on: 2/19/2012 12:51:21 AM

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Tabitha
Hi, read your story.  It has an interesting ending, but it seemed to take a long time to get there.  Your story has several mispellings and a grammar error or two, you need to spend more time rewriting, rewriting, rewriting, and making sure that your sentences are necessary, clear, concise.  The story could use a good deal of editing.  The leaner, more muscular the sentences, the stronger your story will be.  Thanks for sharing it with me, I hope this review helps!
Cheers!  Keep writing!  And have a look at some of my stories again.
Best regards,
Laine Scheliga

From: Laine Scheliga | Created on: 10/26/2011 7:22:58 PM

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