Good plot
This story has a good plot, but it is a little choppy. It could use some more detail and a little more explanation. Otherwise it is pretty good.
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Amelia
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3/26/2012 11:20:27 PM
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a cute story with an obvious morale
It was worth the read but little short and choppy. it could easily be expended with more description
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Rick Schember
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12/5/2010 7:03:46 PM
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A Child's Imagination
I think this story captures a child's imagination and thought process fairly well. The story itself could use a little polish. I felt that the emotions expressed by the parents were a little weak.
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Stephanie Pardee
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11/30/2010 1:47:33 PM
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Cute Story
This is a good story for readers of all ages. Kathy is just a typical child with an abundant sense of adventure. All in all great story!
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Amanda Graves
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11/15/2010 7:06:28 PM
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Fun reading
Fun reading for all ages. Brings enlightning thougts from almost any angle. For a parent, knowing how young creative minds operate, a reminder to stay in communication with their youn ones. For a young person, a reminder to stop and think about the choices they might make in the future.
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Celeste Tazza
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11/8/2010 8:46:13 PM
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Great read!!!
A simple joy to read! This author really captures the plain and simple truth about life in everything she writes. I enjoyed this short story and look forward to future submissions from her.
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James Herold
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11/8/2010 4:20:03 PM
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if only life were as simple as a child
This book was great. Anna captures the lessons of childhood. I love her writing style. There is an innocence that she creates and delivers to the reader.
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Stephanie Herold
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11/8/2010 11:25:21 AM
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The Great Green Blue Yonder
This was a great short story. This story got my interest right away it was very exciting and I can't wait to see what Anna Roberts writes next. I love the imaginatiion of a child.
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Kathy Schulfer
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11/7/2010 1:19:13 PM
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Great Book, keeps you hooked
This was a great short story. Can't wait for the author to list more.
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Unknown
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11/2/2010 1:45:33 PM
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