great story
I loved it. It had me hooked and wanting to keep reading from the very start. I also had a great image of what was going on in the story. Can't wait to read another from you.
Nice job!
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gabrielle gehringer
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10/24/2010 5:06:45 PM
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VERY GOOD!!!
I felt like I was there with him, I would really like to read another short story, or even novel, you must post one if you write a full length novel, the detail and story line stuck, and the whole time I wanted more. The ending was very open, you could even make a couple short stories based on the first. FIVE STARS, the only thing that needed some work was minor very minor puncutation correction. Other than that great job!!!!!
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Tina Burns
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Created on:
10/23/2010 1:20:13 PM
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