Reviewing "Credit Check"
Read the reviews and you'll find the other good writers. "Credit Check" is the perfect, provocative piece with which to begin a day.
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Cameron Yow
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1/8/2012 8:58:33 AM
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Getting Even
I liked it. Pay back can be not only rewarding but also fun.
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Frank Baburek
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10/11/2011 8:42:20 PM
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Love It!
A wonderfully dry slug of humor with a twist of lemon! The first page tossed some effective combinations at my noodle and the last line floored me...Can't wait for the chaser.
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Ralph Myers
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8/10/2011 10:23:20 PM
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I'll echo what everyone else here has said
I too admire the economy of writing and the sharply-drawn characters. But I feel this could go on even more, and the writing could still be economical and tight. Brilliantly done, but I feel more like this is an appetizer than a meal. More, more!
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John Grabowski
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7/3/2011 3:49:20 PM
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A Little Goes a Long Way
This author did an excellent job of cramming the personalities and backgrounds of two characters into just two typed pages; and, moreover, adding a twist to the plot that both set apart the story and sent a message loud and strong. This is good writing.
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Rachel Devin
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6/14/2011 5:23:20 PM
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What does what we "know" really matter?
A glimpse into the modern relationship, the modern divorce, and how we now use what a computer knows about us. The heart of this story is the ending.
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Gimbiya Kettering
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6/8/2011 1:44:34 PM
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Check out "Credit Check"!
This writer's command of language and sense of humor always dazzle me, and the last line of this story is perfect. A must-read!
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Melanie McDonald
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5/31/2011 4:22:27 PM
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waste not, want not
Spare and authoritative writing. Bravo!
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Mina Samuels
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5/31/2011 12:36:12 PM
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A Delightful Read
Economical! Not a wasted word.
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Patsy Sims
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5/28/2011 10:16:24 PM
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Compelling work in so few words.
This author has an engaging voice that captures complex feelings in a lightening bolt. She is a delight to read.
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paris singer
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5/28/2011 10:13:18 AM
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Credit Check
If you read nothing else, read this one! It is a tiny gem, exquisitely cut and polished to perfection!
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carol booker
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5/27/2011 9:16:48 PM
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Credit Check
I laughed. I like her style.
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Phyllis Verma
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5/27/2011 4:11:35 PM
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Short - but entetaining
Clever writing.
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Alex Bearden
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5/26/2011 3:29:58 PM
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