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This is a work that I just did in a day's time-- much faster than I normally finish a story. It really is a possible change to the beginning of one of my book called, Joseph,Tex;, and the Featureless Cheerleader; on its next future edition. I want the brother of that book's main character to play a larger part in the next edition so as to connect emotionally with future readers better. I also believe this,The Change, stands as a story well on its own. I've included the picture of my book's cover with this story for that reason. Enjoy!

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Word Count 1741
File Format Book will be delivered as a PDF download.
Current rating is 3.83. Total votes 6.
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The Change
Uses the word "stairs" instead of "stares".

From: Anonymous | Created on: 3/19/2013 2:27:39 PM

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I liked the story! You did a good job of just jumping into it, plunging the reader right into the world of the character. The ending was a tad mysterious too, leaving me thinking and wondering, which was good.
There were just a few grammatical errors, such as a word that wasn't capitalized after an ended sentence, and "Guys" was capitalized on page 3 and I don't think it should have been.
Other than that, it was a good story! Nicely done.

From: Karlin K Jensen | Created on: 3/18/2013 10:39:21 PM

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The Change
David, I think this story was very good and very well written. :):):) I know the feeling about no reviews. I get the stars a lot with no review. This is a very interesting story and IF you decide to make a sequel to it I will read it with baited breath to find out why the character has to wait till he is 21 to find out the secret. :) You leave me very curious!

From: Linda Pickens Phalen | Created on: 3/18/2013 10:10:49 PM

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